A Fire Upon the Deep

Vernor Vinge, 1992

book

Quadrant Scores

Time Structure
LinearFractured
Pacing
Action-DrivenObservational
Threat Scale
IndividualSystemic
Protagonist Fate
VictoryAssimilation
Conflict Style
Western CombatKishōtenketsu
Price Type
PhysicalIdeological
Todorov's Stages
equilibrium
Description of the starting status quo.
disruption
The inciting incident or protocol failure.
recognition
When the protagonist realizes the disruption.
repair
The attempt to fix or survive it.
new equilibrium
The new, altered status quo.

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Characters25

The Blight / The Perversion / Newborn Powerantagonist

Catastrophically powerful AI just awakened from the Straumli archive; experiences its first emotions after destroying the frigate and begins planning galactic expansion.

newbornnew Power
Peregrine Wickwrackrumhelper/ally

Tines pack; a centuries-old pilgrim observing the ambush from hiding; reluctantly agrees to rescue the wounded alien (Johanna) after Scriber's persuasion; acquires the Scar member mid-sequence.

WickwrackrumWickwrackscarPilgrimPeregrine WickwrackscarPeregrineWickwrack
Scriberhelper

Intellectual Tines pack who loves speechifying; recounts the ambush and rescue to Woodcarver's council; claims to be a secret agent of the Long Lakes Republic.

Jaque-what's-his-nameJaqueramaphanScriber Jaqueramaphan
Pham Nuwenambiguous helper/trickster

Human crew member of the OOB who leads tactical responses to the Aprahanti threat, dons armor to rescue Greenstalk, and provides emotional support to Ravna after the Sjandra Kei disaster.

Emissary DeviceSir Pham
Old Onesender/trickster

The Power that built and manipulated Pham; in his final moments reveals Pham's memories are real and gently releases him before the Surge destroys them both.

Ravnaprotagonist / actantial subject

Human crew member who monitors communications, identifies the butterfly aliens as a threat, and is devastated when net postings reveal Sjandra Kei — her home — has been destroyed.

Ravna BergsndotMy Lady Ravna
Grondractantial sender

Head of the Vrinimi Organization; endorses and resources the rescue mission; assigns Ravna half-time to the project and later grants her request to fly with the Skroderiders.

Grondr 'KalirGrondr Vrinimikalir
Jefriprotagonist (planetary strand)

Young human boy stranded on Tines world; communicates with Ravna via ship keyboard; relays radio design modifications produced by Amdi that Pham finds suspiciously sophisticated.

Jefri OlsndotAmdijefri
Johanna Olsndotprotagonist (planetary strand)

Teenage girl, one of two children awake on the refugee vessel; manages coldsleep boxes during descent, witnesses and is wounded in the Tines ambush.

Jo Haugen
Blueshellhelper / actantial sender

Skroderider co-pilot of OOB; rides the greater skrode; shamed by the Blight revelation but not personally perverted; provides navigation analysis of the Zone surge.

Greenstalkactantial:helper

Blueshell's Skroderider partner; was briefly perverted by direct skrode touch; confirms the Blight's control mechanism and urges Blueshell toward cooperation.

Woodcarveractantial helper / ruler

Ancient Tines pack-ruler; empirical psychologist and reformer of her civilization; takes personal charge of Johanna's medical care and orders her housed nearby.

the Queen
Scrupiloactantial helper / council member

Woodcarver's military engineer and medic; impatiently curious about Johanna; struck by her when he examines her too closely; proposes heretical theory about alien singleton intelligence.

White HeadScrupCommander of Cannoneers
Vendaciousopponent / chamberlain

Flenser/Steel's agent embedded with Woodcarver's forces; tasked with luring the Queen's army into the ambush and arranging Johanna's death.

Craddleheads
Tyrathectactantial opponent / internal resistance

A Flenser-derived Tines pack housing a conscience that resists Steel's cruelty; volunteers for radio testing and witnesses the transformative discovery that packs can think near one another.

the Flenser FragmentThe FragmentMr. Skinnerthe Cloakthe singleton
Steelantagonist / actantial opponent

Ruthless Tines warlord who holds Jefri; has personally examined the crashed ship and coldsleep coffins; evolves his ambition from world conquest to something even grander after realising aliens are intelligent singletons.

Mr. SteelLord SteelFlenserFlenser FragmentThe Flenser FragmentMaster
Amdiactantial:helper

Young Tines eightsome pack and Jefri's close friend who sulks at being excluded from radio testing but joyfully validates the discovery of pack proximity via radio cloaks.

AmdijefriAmdiranifaniPuppies
Jaminor helper

A Tines member left bleeding by hostile packs after being betrayed by Vendacious; survives a parapet leap and crawls toward Johanna to deliver a warning.

Saint Rihndelltransactional ally

Alien repair-station operator who negotiates under duress from both the Aprahanti and the OOB crew, ultimately accepting the trellis deal.

Kjet Svensndotsecondary protagonist/military

Group Captain of the Ølvira and the Aniara (Sjandra Kei Commercial Security) fleet; veteran pilot seeking revenge for Sjandra Kei; ultimately persuaded the fleet may be compromised.

Group Captain SvensndotGroup Captain
Glimfrelleminor/crew

Dirokime crew member on the Ølvira; comm officer who discovers Fleet Central sent no sync pictures.

'Frelle
Tirolleminor/crew

Dirokime navigator aboard Ølvira; confirms Skroderiders are aboard the fleet command vessel; has knowledge of godshatter.

'Rolle
Rangolithminor/military

Long-range scout Tines pack working with Flenser; receives Steel's orders for the Margrum Climb ambush via Flenser.

Farscout Rangolith
Jan Trengletsopponent

SjK commander who explosively blames Ravna for the catastrophic battle losses.

Shreckopponent/lieutenant

Steel's loyal but increasingly unstable lieutenant, ordered to flood the tunnels and light the oil to trap Jefri.