A Desolation Called Peace

Arkady Martine, 2021

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Methodology:

Quadrant Scores

Time Structure

LinearFractured

Pacing

Action-DrivenObservational

Threat Scale

IndividualSystemic

Protagonist Fate

VictoryAssimilation

Conflict Style

Western CombatKishōtenketsu

Price Type

PhysicalIdeological

Todorov's Stages

equilibrium

Description of the starting status quo.

disruption

The inciting incident or protocol failure.

recognition

When the protagonist realizes the disruption.

repair

The attempt to fix or survive it.

new equilibrium

The new, altered status quo.

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# Structural Analysis

## 1. Protocol Fiction Mapping (Summer of Protocols)
- **Render a Rule:** 
- **Rehearse a Failure Mode:** 
- **Reveal a Human Insight:** 

## 2. Actantial Model (A.J. Greimas)
- **Subject:** 
- **Object:** 
- **Sender (Destinator):** 
- **Receiver (Destinatee):** 
- **Helper:** 
- **Opponent:** 

## 3. Todorov's Equilibrium Model
- *See YAML Frontmatter for stage breakdown.*

## 4. The Freytag Pyramid
- **Exposition:** 
- **Climax:** 

## 5. Propp's Morphology of the Folktale
- **Applicable Narratemes:** 

## 6. Genette's Narrative Discourse
- **Order / Duration / Focalization:** 

## 7. The Monomyth / Hero's Journey
- **Subversions:** 

## 8. Dan Harmon's Story Circle
- **The Take (The Price Paid):** 

## 9. Save the Cat! Beat Sheet
- **Pacing Deviations:** 

## 10. Kishōtenketsu (Four-Act Structure)
- **Applicability:** 

## 11. The Three-Act Structure
- **Plot Points:** 

## 12. Lévi-Strauss's Binary Oppositions
- **Primary Binary:** 
- **Secondary Binary:** 
- **The Mediator:** 

## 13. Cognitive Estrangement (Suvin / Shklovsky)
- **The Familiar Concept:** 
- **The Estranging Mechanism:** 
- **The Cognitive Shift:** 

## 14. Bakhtin's Chronotope
- **The Spatial Matrix:** 
- **The Temporal Flow:** 
- **The Point of Intersection:** 

## 15. Aristotelian Poetics
- **Hamartia:** 
- **Peripeteia:** 
- **Anagnorisis:** 

## 16. Jungian Archetypal Analysis
- **The Persona:** 
- **The Shadow:** 
- **The Anima/Animus:** 
- **The Trickster:** 

## 17. Genette's Transtextuality
- **Intertextuality:** 
- **Paratextuality:** 
- **Metatextuality:**

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Characters30

Nine HibiscusYaotlek (fleet commander), Fleet Captain of the Tenth Legion

Rides Shard-sight to surveil Sixteen Moonrise's advance; discovers the massacred Peloa-2 colony and begins theorizing alien motive; emotionally bonds with her troops during collective mourning.

yaotlekMallow

Twenty CicadaIkantlos-prime, Nine Hibiscus's second-in-command

Nine Hibiscus's second-in-command who deduces the alien fungal hive mind, volunteers to eat the fungus and join the collective, and is absorbed as 'Swarm' in the postlude.

Swarmikantlos-primeadjutant

Mahit DzmareFormer Lsel Station Ambassador; first-contact linguist

Former Lsel Ambassador; carries Yskandr's imago; navigates dual loyalties to Lsel and Teixcalaan while helping broker first contact and defending Lsel's technology against Tarats's condemnation.

the barbarianAmbassadorDzmareAmbassador Dzmare

Yskandr AghavnMahit's imago-predecessor; internal voice

Mahit's imago-predecessor; internal voice diagnosing Mahit's emotional states with authority born of shared endocrine experience; bleeds his own memories of Nineteen Adze into Mahit's feelings for Three Seagrass.

Aknel AmnardbatCouncilor for Heritage, Lsel Station; antagonist

Ideologically driven opponent of Teixcalaanli cultural influence; sabotaged Mahit's imago-machine; intercepts Three Seagrass in the market and confronts Mahit at the shuttle bay.

Dekakel OnchuCouncilor for the Pilots, Lsel Station

Lsel Station Councilor for the Pilots; scrambles military craft as aliens breach the Anhamemat Gate; allows Darj Tarats to leave on his retrieval mission.

Eight AntidoteImperial prince and apprentice observer

Eleven-year-old clone-descendant of Six Direction; deliberately manipulates his physical resemblance to unsettle Nineteen Adze; precociously tests political boundaries and military thinking.

the Curelittle spyimperial heirCure

Eleven LaurelThird Undersecretary of the Third Palm, Ministry of War

Undersecretary of the Third Palm whose apparent mentorship conceals calculated manipulation; revealed to have sacrificed his own student Sixteen Moonrise for institutional advantage.

Undersecretary

Three SeagrassInformation Ministry envoy, Third Undersecretary

Arrived at Lsel under civilian cover to recruit Mahit; wanders the station market, is intercepted by Amnardbat, and ultimately uses diplomatic authority to extract Mahit from the hangar standoff.

Reedthe envoyEnvoy

Sixteen MoonriseFleet Captain, Twenty-Fourth Legion; internal antagonist

Fleet Captain of the Twenty-Fourth Legion; loyal to Eleven Laurel but harboring doubts; openly warns Nine Hibiscus about factional conspiracies while positioning her legion for a strike.

Fleet CaptainFleet Captain Sixteen MoonriseAscentApogee

Thirty Wax-SealCaptain of Knifepoint's Ninth Blooming

Scout-gunner captain who debriefs Nine Hibiscus on the alien encounter, visibly shaken by the incomprehensible transmission and the ring-ship's assault.

Twelve FusionIkantlos-prime to Sixteen Moonrise

Sixteen Moonrise's adjutant, advocates for military annihilation over any diplomatic approach to the aliens.

Nineteen AdzeReigning Emperor

Pragmatic emperor who reacts with involuntary recoil to Eight Antidote's mimicry of Six Direction; reveals calculated reasons for appointing Nine Hibiscus and a cryptic past act to protect Eight Antidote from becoming his ancestor.

the EmperorHer Illuminate Majesty

Darj TaratsCouncilor for the Miners, Lsel Station

Lsel Councilor for the Miners; departs to retrieve Mahit Dzmare claiming he will redirect the war, contradicting earlier suspicion of abandonment.

Councilor TaratsCouncilor for the Miners

Three Azimuthactantial:sender

Minister of War who plans the shatterbomb destruction of the alien planet, intending to sacrifice Nine Hibiscus and Sixteen Moonrise to deliver the attack.

Minister of Warbutcher of the Nakharese mind

Six CapsaicinShip captain, minor

Captain of a military supply ship who pragmatically approves Mahit's passage when Three Seagrass frames it with official language.

Two FoamComms officer, Weight for the Wheel

Comms officer on the bridge of Weight for the Wheel; manages fleet status displays and relays communications.

Bubbles

Eighteen ChiselFleet officer; intelligence analyst

Reports discovery of the alien home system and proposes a nuclear scatterbomb strike.

Six RainfallShip's doctor or medical researcher

Discovers undescribed fungal spore structures in the alien corpse's oral cavity and recklessly takes a sample, aerosolizing them.

FirstAlien contact individual

One of two aliens who descend to Peloa-2; points at the audio equipment; participates in replaying the hello noise.